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I rewrite the first article, "An interview with a dolphin trainer"

Bonnie Chan has on of the worst jobs in the world- or at least she thinks so! She's a panda trainer at Brenda Park. Find out more about Bonnie and her boring job in the interview below.

How did you become a panda trainer?

I saw an advertisement in the newspaper. I thought it sounded like an unusual job so I applied. That was nearly five years ago.

What qualifications do you need to become a panda trainer?

Most of the trainers do not have patience, but i have patience.

What does a panda trainer actually do?

Well, one obvious answer is train pandas. However, we spend less time doing this than people think. Our main responsibility is to look after the pandas- to make sure that they are happy and healthy. For example, the first thing I do every morning is to check the place where the panda lives, because the panda do not know how to go to the toilet, and this is too smelly for me to clean it. I also spend a lot of time feeding the pandas, playing with them. Pandas are very stupid. This is a picture of me stoking and play with my favourite stupid panda, Brenda.

How do you train a panda?

One of the first thing we teach the pandas is to dive. That is the shallow pool over there. It is about a metre long and half metre deep. They also learn other simple tricks such as shaking hands, singing and dancing. It takes time to learn tricks so the younger pandas generally know fewer tricks than the older ones.

Would you recommend this job to other people?

No, definitely. It's hard work and do not have any reward.

Fuk Lam Reflection

On Friday, it was Reading Activity Day. At afternoon, we went to Fuk Lam Church, it located on the temple street. I thought it must be very big, but in the true it is very small. We talked many thing, about our family, school life and some informations of us. After this trip, I think I want to go to the church one per week, because I know if I feel upset, the people who at the church will help me. I felt that God is very amazing, he will help you. God loves us.

Heavy Rain

Yesterday was heavy rain. If in the normal time, I will be happy, but I felt upset yesterday. I finished the course in Methodist College, then I saw there was heavy rain. Unfortunately, I forgot to bring my umbrella. And I need to buy MacDonald for my sister, so I called my sister took a umbrella to me, but she said no, because she is busy. I was very angry and I did not want to buy food for her, but I promised my mum. Then when I got back to home, I was drenched to the skin. However, my sister did not say thanks to me. So, yesterday I was very angry.

Second Journal

Dear Dairy, ( Sunny Day)

Today I wake up at 10:00, it is very late, because I am very tired. After I finish my breakfast, I do my English homework. My parent take me to Junk Bay and go to the Tai Wan food festival, because the shopping mall invent the whole street to Hong Kong. The food are very famous. This is one of my unforgotten day.

Journal

Dear Diary, ( Rainy Day)

Today I wake up at 7:30, because I need to go to school to have a french lesson and art design lesson. I think it is very boring, but I still need to have the lesson, because my mum order me. About 4:30, Alsace and I go to our neighborhood to take photo for our geography project. At night, my family and I go to have a dinner at a hot pot restaurant. But I am confusing why my parent bring me to eat hot pot in the summer. However, although now is in summer, but the food are delicious. Today, I feel happy.

Brenda
12 the April,2008

My favourite television programmes

My favourite television programmes are Project Runway and America's Next Top Model . They are show in Pearl which is use English. Project Runway is talking some designer design some dress to match up the theme. I think it is very interesting and exciting. America's Next Top Model is talking some girl who are going to win the contract of Elite Model Management. The girl are very beautiful and smart. The competition has thirteen week, each week's theme are different. They may be will take photos or make a video. Sometimes, it has a competition of Cover girl, the winner will shows on the front of the magazine. So, this two television programmes are my favourites.

Five paragraph of the story

Exposition

Axl and Stephanie met in the Rainbow Bar. Axl, Stephanie and their friends were smoking,drinking. However, Axl and Stephanie were kissing. they felt that they likes each other too much, so they got married.

Rising action

Axl and Stephanie got married in the church. Unfortunately Axl forgot to bring their ring, however, a boy name Slash borrowed a pair of beautiful ring to Axl. Althogh they got married, but Stephine still felt upset because Axl forgot to bring their ring. Slash was too angry, so he bought a gun at a gun shop. At the wedding party, it had a heavy rain. All the people were hided under the table or ran in to the house. A man destroyed the wedding cake when he was running. At this moment, Stephanie felt she did not love Axl anymore. However, Stephanie got crazy.

Climax

After a week, Axl went to the Rainbow Bar and play piano with a beauitful lady. Suddenly, Stenphanie came into the Rainbow bar and fight with that lady. Slash knew Axl play piano with a lady, and he was too angry about this. This was all because he was love Stephanie for 10 years.
So Slash drove that lady to die. Axl knew that lady was die, he went to found Slash. Axl asked Slash why he went to kill that girl. Slash said that was all because he loved Stephanie very much. Slash took out his gun, and pointed it to Axl head and then fire. But die in front of Slash not is Axl , is Stephanie.

Falling action

Axl felt very sad of his wife death, so he went to see a doctor. But it does not work, so he went to buy a gun.

Resolution

Then, he walked on the snow. And killed himself.

A theme that I will write in the letter

I will write a theme is bullying. Also I will use helpless to describe Jeremy. I will talk about why Jeremy be bullying, how the classmates bullyed him, and what do Jeremy feels. I think Jeremy feels helpless.